Another Second Australian Imperial Force infantry battalion, this one being raised mainly from volunteers from Queensland. They were part of a small number of Australian soldiers who served in the United Kingdom during the war, and then later fought in North Africa, the Middle East and the Pacific. Thank you to everyone who takes part in this review. Comments : As always, feel free to revert my copyediting.
From now on, I'm doing the same things at A-class that I've been doing at Peer Review, and not supporting or opposing. I've copyedited down to Middle East and skimmed the rest, and I don't think prose issues will be a problem at WP:FAC, if you want to take it there after you're done here. At FAC, I'll be happy to support on prose and copyedit the rest, although I may wait until you get one or two supports first.
These are my edits. Comments Support by Peacemaker67 crack Comment Have amended the bit dealing with Buna-Gona as the chronology as it was just wasn't right - eg, it implied arriving at Oro Bay before the fighting had stated.
Hope this helps. I have found a few of the sentences excessively long and some of the text a little repetitive. I will go through it again and make some edits as suggestions.
_Rathaus_1.jpg/1200px-Laufenburg_(Baden)_Rathaus_1.jpg "Nutten in Laufenburg (Baden)")
Comments This article is in very good shape, and I have only the following comments:. Jacob L. The second most senior general in Europe in World War II remained poorly known and his name frequently mispronounced - it's Dev-ers not Deev-ers for decades. Suddenly, he has two biographies. And now a good Wikipedia article. Hawkeye7 talk , 28 November UTC. Support Comments : fantastic work, as usual. Something of a departure for me, in that these ships came from the other side of the North Sea.
